Friday, June 12, 2009

"Love Bug the Lady Bug", by Makayla

There once was a lady bug named Lovebug.
She was a cute lady bug.
Her birthday was coming up.
She thought that her friends had forgotten about her birthday.
She went to her friend, Rabbit's.
When she looked inside, no one was there.
"That's strange," she thought.
"I wonder where he is?" she said.
Then, she went to Grasshopper's house.
When she knocked on the door, no one answered.
"I wonder where she is?" she thought as she walked home.
Meanwhile, back at Lovebug's house, Rabbit and Grasshopper were busy making Lovebug a lovely cake.
When they heard her coming, they quickly turned out the lights. Then they hid.
When she opened the door...
"SURPRISE!"
They popped out of hiding.
Lovebug was SO SURPRISED!
"I thought you had forgot it!" she said.
"You're a great bug, we'd never forget."
"Oh, I'm so lucky!"she said.

3 comments:

Natalie said...

What a cute little story! Makayla you are amazing! You have so many great talents!

Burke family said...

I love it! I think she should illustrate it and make a real book - I know her siblings would love reading it for sure.

Tara said...

What a great story! Ethan and Dallas love anything that has to do with bugs and they enjoyed that! We're all very impressed with your writing talents, Makayla!